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__**The pond**__

It was a wonderful morning to have a nice family reunion, I love when my relatives even if I never met them. We were all surrounded in my backyard and every kid were surrounded around my pond [we had it when we moved in]. Anyways my cusand and me were talking about how she knows how to swim and I'm two years old. She just irritants me even if I can't swim but I am two and I can't really stand up for myself till.... I showed her when I jumped into the pond groaning and showing her 'I can swim' I began seeking to the bottom while My brother was watching the whole thing saying 'Brianna's groining someone save Here comes my dad to the rescue pulling my head up way up her high and dragging me to shower, I was still breathing if my mom never called 911. I guess I was a little stupid for showing off and I didn't really thought about it that much I thought I could swim in a five foot water pond. After I got out conchs I was miserable by strings and a thing in my wrist and tears out of my eyes that were pounding on the floor like fire works prating on the ground.

When I found out about the traggicty about me from my mom it was really surprising and that's why my dad bared it so I wouldn't do that again. I wished he never did that, if only wish I was exaggerating. The expereance was funomnal, the tents bulled in side me the night meres waking me up every night is so not awesome. So thats why you never ground in a pond.

Lead 1: Crash swish as the waves came up when I puitaled for my death.

Lead 2: "Who's in the pond" my brother yelled out loud while everybody was staring.

Lead 3: The site whasen't that pretty when I went head first in the gretful pond.