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 draft of Snowboarding By Bree

Before M.J. “Jack” Burchett built the first snowboard there was barley anything to do. Snowboarding has been a part of the Olympics since 1998, at Vancouver snowboarding makes its third Olympic appearance. The competitor is judged on a 0.1 through 10.0 scale to see how well they did on any run that they did. Always stay in control, and be able to stop or avoid other people or objects. You must not stop where you obstruct a trail, or are not visible from above. Whenever starting downhill or merging into a trail, look up hill and yield to others. Keep off closed trails and out of closed areas. Prior to using any lift, you must have the knowledge and ability to load, ride and unload safely. All snowboarders have to train in any kind of mountains or free space, they need a lot of time and hard work to get the 10.0 that they want. The first person has been the most successful is Shawn White. The second person who has been most successful is Danny Davis. Shawn White expects to be a gold medal winner and condender. Clearly you can see before M.J. “Jack” Burchett built the first snowboard there was barley anything to do.

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Before M.J. “Jack” Burchett built the first snowboard there was barley anything to do. Snowboarding has been a part of the Olympics since 1998. The competitor is judged on a 0.1 through 10.0 scale to see how well they did on any run that they did. Always stay in control, and be able to stop or avoid other people or objects. You must not stop where you obstruct a trail, or are not visible from above. Whenever starting downhill or merging into a trail, look up hill and yield to others. Keep off closed trails and out of closed areas. Prior to using any lift, you must have the knowledge and ability to load, ride and unload safely. All snowboarders have to train in any kind of mountains or free space, they need a lot of time and hard work to get the 10.0 that they want. The first person has been the most successful is Shawn White. The second person who has been most successful is Danny Davis. Shawn White expects to be a gold medal winner and condender. Clearly you can see before M.J. “Jack” Burchett built the first snowboard there was barley anything to do.======