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 * Rachel**

One fine day in spring there was a little girl in first grade. Her name was Rachel her favorite thing to do was cartwheels. every recess all she did was cartwheels. she love to do them so much she was the greatest. there was a little boy in her class his named was James whom. Rachel had then biggest crush in him. One day when Rachel was trying to get James attention she was with all her friends and she was doing cartwheels Rachel was doing a cartwheel and she was wearing pants that didn't fit her. Rachel had gathered all the people in 1st grade because she knew if she invited everyone to come that James would come. so Rachel was getting ready to do her cartwheel and she knew it would be the greatest. So the moment that Rachel started the cartwheel she knew this would end honorable. That one moment Rachel was in the air she felt a breeze on my waist."Ahhhhhhhh, someone help me!" This is worst day in history. Just a few seconds after the cartwheel Rachel was devastated Rachel ran away crying so hard kids were making fun of Rachel except James didn't think that was funny. Rachel pulled up her pants and ran away. James called for Rachel but she didn't answer instead she said leave me alone. Rachel was humidified and she didn't know what to do but cry. After recess Rachel didn't want to is cry. Going back to the classroom the teacher asked sweetly" why are you crying" "It was nothing, just leave me alone" a grumpy 5 year old said to a teacher. Rachel tried to stop crying but she couldn't. "People started laughing at me" Rachel said quietly to her teacher. "Who laughed at Rachel to at recess?" Half the classes hands went into the air. Rachel thought calmly for a moment and she said to herself "Oh No! James saw my under pants too. Why me? A minute later the whole class said together " Were sorry Rachel" in a very sincere voice. " It's OK" Rachel said cheering up. But all she could think about was James. At the end of the day Rachel couldn't stop crooning tear came after another. Little tears came down her face plip-plop. The next recess Rachel didn't even think of doing another cartwheel. Then a miracle happened James ran up to Rachel and said "I still thought you cartwheel was good. But anyways I saw you fall, Are you OK? I saw what happened and I didn't think it was funny. So are you OK? " Ya I guess" Rachel whispered to James. " well I would love to see another cartwheel" James announced Rachel was sure that this would be the one. hand went down and then the other to do a cartwheel. Then the grand finally." did it Rachel yelled to the whole world. "That was so cool" James said to Rachel. At the end of the of the day Rachel went home so accomplished, so happy,and so joyful. that day I knew that James Whom loved her.


 * 1) "Haaaa Haaa Haaa" all the kids laughed as Rachel as she fell to the floor. She didn't know what to do but cry.She Rachel lane, was devastated.

2. Going back to the classroom the teacher asked sweetly" why are you crying" "It was nothing, just leave me alone" a grummpy 5 year old said to a teacher.

3.It all started on a sunny day in spring, the perfect cartwheel is going to be today Rachel thought.Then **"crash"** just a few seconds later. what went wrong? tell me Rachel said to Melanie!