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it was a chilly evening out when the clouds slowly inched through the sky. Good bye my dad said as he headed out the door for his meeting  I will back at 8 you and Maggie be back at 8 to. me and Maggie went to her friend Alana's.we drove in the car i looked out the windows and saw how it was getting dark out a lot earlier. It was pretty chilly out and i had forgotten my coat!! it was 2 days before Halloween, so as we drove through the decorated neighborhoods i saw all the spooky Halloween dressed houses with decorations. finally, we arrived at Alana's! and she announced'' lets carve a pumpkin! we drove up to kings supers. we ran inside kings and bought a mammoth pumpkin and a pumkin smaller than a when we were carving our sphere pumpkin, a fox came up in her yard! her dog started barking and i started screaming her dog is brown curly poodle hes so ugly looking. once the fox was gone we began to starting carving our pumpkin. we put a scary frightening face on on our ball of orange!!! once we were done carving the spooky orange pumpkin, we went in Alana's house and made orange cookies with Halloween faces .... boy were they good!! we also made bats and ghost cookies they were very cute looking! it was about 6:45 so we went to the park with Louis! as i went down the slide i felt cold went down the slide i felt cold wind rush to my face. and as i grabbed bar bye bar i felt my hands forming a blister pop right to hands. once we began to walk home i heard the waterfall from the pond splash against the water we finally got back alanas house it was time for Maggie and i to go home. when we got home my dad was waiting outside your coat is int the car my dad blurted.  i know well get it'' he said i did as the door opened a puppy's head popped out! ahhhhh my sister and i screamed is she ours? yes boy that was such a surprise to my staring eyes. she is so so so cute we decided to name her sandy! right when we got inside we put her the tub......boy did she stink!!!!!!! She was a golden retriever and she has a dark nose that looks like a black button. and her eyes, it looks like shes wearing eyeliner because her eyes have black around them. she is a playful fun dog to play with she is very protective and barks at a lot of stuff! the gold haired puppy LOVES to go to the lake and swim in the fishy water!

-LEAD 1 - it all started on a chilly evening when the clouds slowly inched through the sky.

- LEAD 2 - ahh I yelled as a puppys head came darting through my coat!!!!!

-LEAD 3- '' throwing water off her fur boom she scattered across the soaked kitchen dirty floor!! -LEAD 4- darting through the door came a golden puppy