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The Painful Pumpkin By Charlie

It began when the ever so famous Pumpkin was being "attacked" by me. But "The Fat One" had a secret weapon: claws. He defended himself by clawing me though the nose. I screamed in pain as he dug deeper. My Dad heard the sound and rescued me by unclawing my nose and punishing the cruel cat. Even though it was a little cut, the pain didn't wear off quickly. But after a while I was fully healed. Even though he cut me really bad, I still love him very much! Strangely, I still pick him up. And of course he claws me when he doesn't like it, but never as badly as that moment: The Painful Pumpkin.

__LEAD 1:__ MOAW! OUCH! HELP! HELP! What was that? (onomatopoeia) __LEAD 2:__ "I'm going to pick pumpkin up! What the... OUCH!" (dialog) (onomatopoeia) __LEAD 3:__ "Thanks dad, I needed that. Man, that hurt." (middle & go back) (dialog)