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five
I remember the best birthday that I've ever had. that birthday was the nicest, most fun exciting birthday of my life. It was on a summer day of June 16. That day all started with a nap at 12:00 A.M. "Hannah wake up!" one of my friend named laren shouted out right in front of my black beautiful bed set. "It's your birthday!" She called out again. I sprinted up like a frog off a lily pad. "I'ts what?" I questioned, "ooh ya!" I ran out into my beloved backyard still in my purple pansy bedtime dress. As lerin jogged along I saw all my family and friends out the door of my wonderful beloved, tiled kitchen. out the door I saw my family and friends out my screen door. "Surprise!" Lerins sister Emily called out along with my mom, dad, sister, cousins, both Emilly and Jack my grandma and grandpa and more of my family members! I thought they forgot my birthday! turns out they were just trying to surprise me! I laughed a big smile on my face. "thank you!" I hugged my mom and dad like a dog griping on a bone! "thank you, thank you, thank you! my dad smiled "theirs more." my eyes widened bigger than a cows eye. he led me off our porch and into our grass area. In my grass area I saw that their was a nice, big, gigantic swing set! I scrambled onto this one side of it and hollered out this is my side along with my sister Olivia "my side!" I ran back once again to my mom and dad as I hollared out, "thank you!"